Flash Fiction Contest: First Prize Winner

At the conclusion of the Flash Fiction Contest, we prepare for the launch of our next competition: the DBRLTeen Photography Contest. The library is challenging young adult photographers to share their travel-related images as part of our teen Summer Reading theme of “You Are Here.” Whether your travels take you across the world or only as far as your backyard, there is plenty of room for creativity. Find contest rules and submission guidelines after Monday, March 14 at http://teens.dbrl.org. The entry deadline is Friday, April 8. And now without any further ado, our First Place honor goes to Jessica Porter of Columbia.

Drifting

Rick opened his eyes as he was pulled out of the sticky black void of his peaceful slumber. A few solitary drops of spittle floated quietly through the ship in front of his eyes as he struggled to remove himself from the clingy Velcro sleeping wall. With a final shove, Rick sent himself spiraling through the gravity-less metal chamber. He steadied himself on a rapidly passing steel bar, and pulled himself to one of the many double-layer windows. Outside was his desolate planet, Eldura.

He had been assigned to this planet, one of thousands discovered. Rick shivered as he realized yet again how big the universe was, yet only a few thousand light-years away, another craft like his orbited around another uninvestigated planet.

Watching, Waiting, Observing.

That was what he did, and it was all he could do.

Earth was barren now, polluted, deserted, and destroyed. Now the remaining humans searched for a livable planet, one where they could thrive and begin anew. Rick always hoped it would be Eldura, but the atmosphere around it contained large amounts of sarin, a poisonous gas that would make inhabitation almost impossible. So here he was left, orbiting around the hopeless mass of soil and water called Eldura, or planet 13A7D.

Alone. Forever more, drifting.

About Brandy

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13 Responses to Flash Fiction Contest: First Prize Winner

  1. Vanessa says:

    congratulations

  2. cqkirkpat says:

    i won third but you really deserved first prize.

  3. Alex Sandcastle says:

    That was really good!

  4. Tammy says:

    I would love to read more very good!

  5. Linda B. says:

    Amazing – congrats! I am so proud of you.

  6. Laura C says:

    Great job! Congratulations!

  7. Sherry and Bill L. says:

    We are SO proud of you! Congrats! (I want to read the whole story)

  8. Alissa Jelke says:

    How exciting! Congratulations on your first widespread publication, Jessica! The Jelke family cannot wait to read the whole story – when will it come out in paperback? Will Rick ever get to live on a planet again???

  9. Nate Kling says:

    Great stuff!

  10. Georgia says:

    You better sell the movie rights and finance your backpacking trip through Europe. Who should play the part of Rick? Is there more to this document? I’d love to read it. Congratulations!!

  11. Dena, Robbie and Tommy says:

    Wow! Wonderful work Jessica! You always could tell a great story! Congrats!

  12. Papa Dick says:

    Nice prose Jess. It flows very naturally, and it evokes a very clear visual image. Have you started to read science fiction as an inspiration? It makes the reader want the story to continue and flow to some sort of conclusion.

  13. David says:

    Congrats Jess! You could feel how lonely he was… please write more!